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Is this the latest BS-Bingo winner sentence of your company finance and controlling department ?
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To rephrase slightly:
A master budget, part of an overall organization plan for the next year, made up of three components: (1)
the organization goals, (2) the strategic long-range profit plan, and (3) the tactical short-range profit plan.
By making the organization the sub-clause, you help clarify the overall sentence structure (well, if the word clarify can be used in this context).
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That's the subject of a sentence but where's the predicate? A master budget did what? Stick the word "is" between "year," and "made" and then you have a sentence.
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MatthysDT wrote: is it your understanding that the master budget or the organization plan has three components?
Neither. Its the year that has three components. They seem to have odd years where you work 
We can program with only 1's, but if all you've got are zeros, you've got nothing.
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If its ambiguous then its poor English .
I read it as Master budget has 3 parts . If the organisation plan had 3 parts and none of those three parts are the master budget . Then presumably the master budget is a component of 1,2 or 3 . In which case why mention it at all? So I definitly read it as the master budget is a part of the overall organisation plan . The master budget has 3 parts......
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The overall organisation plan for the next four quarters* includes a Master Budget, which comprises three main elements:
1. Organization goals
2. A strategic long-range profit plan
3. A tactical short-range profit plan
Context first (the organisation plan), then the topic, then the explanation of the topic. Putting the context in the middle just makes it harder to absorb the hierarchy.
If you have a numbered list of items: never, ever write them as clauses of the same sentence; put each one on its own line (and, in this case, I would expect each item to be a click-able link to an explanation of the item).
* Or "the four quarters starting [month/year]"
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Master Budget, of course...
MatthysDT wrote: part of an overall organization plan for the next year
is an ancillary phrase describing "Master Budget", the sentence then goes on to further detail of what a Master Budget is comprised.
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modified 24-Aug-16 13:25pm.
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It is entirely incorrect.
1 would not be part of the budget, whereas 2 and 3 most certainly would be. The sentence is incorrectly structured leading to a misunderstanding of the component parts.
It should read:
The master budget is part of an overall organization plan for the next year. Between them they comprise three parts. The overall organization plan contains the organizational goals and the budget contains the strategic long-range profit plan and the tactical short-range profit plan.
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As worded, it is the master budget plan which has three parts. Of those three parts though, 'organization goals' doesn't seem to fit, leading one to think that it should be the organization plan instead. But then, if the budget is part of the organization plan, shouldn't it be one of the three items listed?
The whole sentence is ambiguous, and could be worded much better than it presently is.
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If it still sounds confusing just revise the structure.
Such as:
As part of the overall yearly organization plan, the master budget is comprised of three components:(1) etc...
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Will Shoecifer consume your sole?
Bad command or file name. Bad, bad command! Sit! Stay! Staaaay...
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My sole? No, that would be totally out of plaice! 
Anything that is unrelated to elephants is irrelephant
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The problem with quotes on the internet is that you can never tell if they're genuine
Winston Churchill, 1944
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I'd just like a chance to prove that money can't make me happy.
Me, all the time
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It cod happen.
- I would love to change the world, but they won’t give me the source code.
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Grunt! That sounds fishy to me!
Anything that is unrelated to elephants is irrelephant
Anonymous
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The problem with quotes on the internet is that you can never tell if they're genuine
Winston Churchill, 1944
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I'd just like a chance to prove that money can't make me happy.
Me, all the time
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They do say the devil has the best tuna.
"If you don't fail at least 90 percent of the time, you're not aiming high enough."
Alan Kay.
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No, not if Laceifer gets you first.
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I doubt that - I think he's tied up somewhere else...
Anything that is unrelated to elephants is irrelephant
Anonymous
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The problem with quotes on the internet is that you can never tell if they're genuine
Winston Churchill, 1944
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I'd just like a chance to prove that money can't make me happy.
Me, all the time
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Hopefully that was tongue in cheek.
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Is Bootsy Collins his prophet?
"If you don't fail at least 90 percent of the time, you're not aiming high enough."
Alan Kay.
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That sounds like a load of cobblers to me.
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- Homer
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Soles.
You do have multiple, I'd assume?
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You must be thinking about personalities... 
Anything that is unrelated to elephants is irrelephant
Anonymous
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The problem with quotes on the internet is that you can never tell if they're genuine
Winston Churchill, 1944
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I'd just like a chance to prove that money can't make me happy.
Me, all the time
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This tread is worn out!
If you have an important point to make, don't try to be subtle or clever. Use a pile driver. Hit the point once. Then come back and hit it again. Then hit it a third time - a tremendous whack.
--Winston Churchill
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Shirley talking about our soles should be moved to the Soapbox.
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